ladyiapetus | At least they were honest...

The following review has been submitted to: Being A Tamer Chapter: 1

From: Daisuke12 (http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=361375)

The characters are unlikable and unconvincing. I do not feel for Jaarin. Let me put it more bluntly: I DO NOT LIKE Jaarin. She does not seem realistic to me and your dialogue does not establish a believable character. I also think the plotting is rushed and this hinders character development. You can do better.

From Jaarin: "We are NOT one."

Obviously, this person doesn't like Jaarin.

Now, I felt pretty proud of this fic. I like taking background characters and fleshing them out, and I felt that I did a good job of it with Jaarin regardless of what Daisuke12 thought.

So, Daisuke12, if you ever float by and read this, thank you for your honest opinion. It was a lot better than a flaming "u sux0rs!" And if you're that against the use of side characters as the focus in fics, I have another fic in the works that Jaarin plays a big part in, as well as Kenta, Alice and Minami (a character who was only in movie 5). I just thought I'd let you know so that you could avoid it when it came out.